My flipbook followed a single person on their daily running journey. The title was "A Day in the Life". We watch the subject pass flowers and trees, go through caves, fall down, climb mountains, and more. After the character falls, we read the words, "one step at a time". The end of the flipbook states, "just another day in the life".
I really liked the simplicity of your book and its drawings. The story is also very relatable and fun to follow. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThe story is great that you are telling and it comes across clear in your flip book. I like how we are watching an every day action happening and we wonder if we can relate to the stick figure! Good job, very enjoyable!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. I also liked that you used words and your words were easy to see. i thought your concept was really good.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story that you that you told and the simplicity of your drawings. Great concept
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part of this flip book was the character waking up and getting out of bed. It was pretty detailed and showed good motion. I also loved the moving text at the end. I tried to do text in my book and it looked horrible, so nice work and getting it to look good.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! We did similar messages! I really liked yours! Your stick figures had great detail!
ReplyDeleteI like your book and the story line. It was great to see a story with text. I liked that your book showed variety and simplicity. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the idea and story of your flip book. The transitions worked really well.
ReplyDeleteI liked your use of lines, I'm such a wierdo with thick lines, I believe if used right they help the story line be pushed to a whole another boundary versus tons and tons of detail. Although it's simple and has no color, the text in the book you used create the color and it forces the viewer to put in their own colors if wanted. You left the spectrum wide open for the viewers to dictate the details incase they feel the imagery is plain that re-enacts the reason for books in the first place, even if it's animated piece of a book and etc. It's hard for animations to do that so nice job.
ReplyDeletei liked the incorporation of words into this one.....You used stick figures just like me haha....the thickness of your lines made the pictures really stand out without the use of color...good job
ReplyDeletei liked how you used the entire page as well.. and i liked the stick figure... i was worried if i used it, it wouldn't come out good but you did a great job with it...
ReplyDeletei liked the overall message of the flip book, and that your stick figures were detailed.
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